Ive read almost all those stories and enjoyed them greatly... (in all ways....) But the story that I found best was Lucas saga. I loved that story and was pissed when I got,to the end. But I thoroughly reccomend this book to all

http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600049126&chapter=13

For those of you who actively use emails, and might not check here as often, I'll be starting a mailing list for when I update. Minor thing, but it's out there.

Oh, and should anyone spot an error, it'd be a great help if you'd let me know. Email or here would be fine.

Nice chapter, I just wish it wasn't about Allan, I don't like him XP

Can't wait for the next one!

>>2743
Allan's story is what I focus on when nothing interesting is going on with Iruni's. That, and I like what he's turning out to be (the dislikable/likable guy out for himself and his own goals). Not to say he's a complete ass and ignores things that are going on, but he'll need a lot of persuasion to sacrifice anything he holds dear to him.

I believe next chapter, we may see a gym battle.

>>2734

There's a Tyranitar later on named Sovereign, too...

Gallade/Gardevoir won't ever lose that ability, but he obviously has a preference, though it's at odds with what Jason would like.

Glorious. Simply glorious.

>>2738

Thank you!

Yeah, I understand where you're coming from. Being a junior in high school, I know how schoolwork always get in front of everything you want to do. Just when you get any farther, let me know.

Alright then, I've read the rest of what you had up.

I haven't the foggiest on how long this story's supposed to be, but i get the feeling one of these three main perspectives are about to coincide soon. That should be something.

If there's anything specific that you want input on, let me know.

I'm up to the 15th chapter now. If anybody's still here, let me know what you think of it so far.

Yeah, so I'm like, back and shit.

>>2718

>>2718

HOOOOO

>>2716

It doesn't bother me. If I was looking for realism I wouldn't be reading stories about POKéMON. I have invoked the rule several times.

Armor piercing rounds can drill through a tank.

I don't care how big a steelix is, armor piercing rounds are going to ruin its day.

And since ghosts are energy...

I'd assume any sort of dissipation would work on them.

Although the more you think about it, the more like electric types ghost types become.

Raw energy with sentience oh god it's achieved evelutionary perfection praise arceus!

>>2724
Steelix, maybe. But what about things with no organs like Bronzong or Syglyph. Thing bout steelix is that it's armor is quite possibly thicker than a tanks, and also quite possibly harder. Seeing as it spends a lot of it's time in high heat/high pressure environments. A diamond tipped armor penatrator would be nasty, but not very cost effective seeing how many steelix there are in the world compared to diamonds.

oh I guess I should actually post it huh? yeah that might make it easier to read.

whoops post delay. that still isnt fixed? anyway. here.


Her first hunt. Months upon months to craft her own sword and shield. Months upon months to form her own set of armor from the crap she could find lying around the farm. Months upon months of training with the race of little cat people who helped tend that farm with her. All of it led up to this first hunt, her first hunt. Soon she would be officially recognized by the Guild as a Hunter and that would open the doors to so many more incredible opportunities to explore the region and see all the monsters that inhabited it. All of that time and effort was finally going to come to fruition right here. All she had to do was catch a Girafarig and she would be a real Hunter. She didn't like the idea of hurting the POKéMON, but knew the Guild would take very good care of it and would find it a good home somewhere safe. It was an excellent idea really: Humans were encroaching on the territories and homes of POKéMON so rather than kill off all the POKéMON or let them suffer, the Guild was formed a few years ago as a sort of shelter and rehabilitation zone for POKéMON. Hunters were hired to go out into recently developed areas or those currently under construction and were tasked with effectively “reclaiming” the area for human civilization by each catching a single POKéMON assigned to them by the Guild on a weekly basis. The Hunters were paid and the POKéMON were trained to work with humans or were released somewhere else that wasn't in danger of being built up in the foreseeable future. Some Hunters were even given the POKéMON they rescued to work alongside them on further hunts! She could just imagine it, her own POKéMON. She had always wanted a Metagross but anything would do. Even a Diglett or a Foongus or maybe a Phanpy? She was so excited and nervous that she could hardly stand. So she sat down to think about what to do next rather than let her mind wander into oblivion.
“Okay. Girafarig are too tall to hide in the grass around here and there aren't many trees, but they're too smart to be seen out in the o

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>>2722
Race of cat people... armor and swords... POKéMON?

BAHAHAHA... this could be a wonderfully hilarious and epic story if its the mix of games I think it is.

>>2640

The Masuda Method supports globalization, which is #6 on my list of "Things that are killing America". For that reason, I don't trust it.

>>2644
Globalization isn't killing America, poorly educated people borrowing inane amounts of money and being unable to pay it back are ruining America.

But I'm Australian, what do I know. My country is doing just fine.

Still confuses me as to how America doesn't have a goods and services tax on everything though. We pay a little more for shit here, but our shit is nicer, etc. not even kidding. When I was in new York last year all the police cars look old as fuck.

Plus free healthcare, etc.

>>2644
Wow, proposing isolationism in the 21st century? I never thought I'd see the day I met somebody so incredibly stupid and shortsighted.

TA numba 65 is now completed and being beta tested by MAH BOIIII Jabbz. Took a while, longer than it probably should have. That's why pic is related.

Anyways, today or tomorrow you should be seeing an update on FF.net.

...

So...I have a Bleach fic on FF.net that nobody is reading...just saying.

All, I come bearing an important announcement. I've discussed it with Jabbz, and I've come to the conclusion that I am cancelling Spiritual Soul Sunset and exiting from Jabbz' universe in the Pokemon realm.

It's been a fun ride, writing SSS and other related fics, but they were more like Pokemon stories with training wheels, as I had never written a Pokemon fic before (I even had Jabbz write a battle scene for me before I did one on my own). We found we were both annoyed by the boundaries of our stories; my meddling in his 'verse, and then my inability to fully articulate my fics as I had to abide by the laws of his 'verse. So, Fisher Price: My First Pokemon Fan Fic, aka Spiritual Soul Sunset is cancelled. In exchange for a new story.

I've just began writing the new story, which is titled 'No Matter What, You Always Are.' A vague title, but it'll become apparent (I think) as the story moves on. It's still in its prototype form, as I'm figuring out what to do. Old characters such as Edgar and Marilyn will return of course. Sadly Blodige will not make an appearance, but his team will become Edgar's. I'm still in a state of confusion as I climb away from the rubble of the demolished SSS complex, but it should all be sorted out soon. I will be deleting the stories from my page, and that's something I personally want to do.

I think it'll be better for everyone; I can use all my imagination and make my own limits in my world, and not have to rely on someone elses content. So in conclusion, wait patiently for my new stuph. Tis a new beginning, and I'm feelin' good.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TeGizdZR0Bs

>>2568
Just remember, slash the amount of pop culture references you make. That will be a big challenge I know, but its one you've still been having trouble with. And yeah, it's true, we did bot agree that this was the best idea. At least your training story was better than the one I picked *coughs*. So yes, how 'bout them weather patterns?

Thanks for the feedback, guys. And I'll make sure to watch out for that in the future, Nona. Thanks again.

@Psy: Ever hear the phrase, "pity fuck"?

You know my thoughts on this, but I'm fine with repeating them if you are!

This chapter's fantastic on all accounts. All things start to come together, and the lack of Jerry is good too.

Thanks again for yhe great read, Espy. Hope to see more soon.

Been awhile, hasn't it?
I don't have a new chapter up just yet. Another project + work has been keeping me mighty busy.

However, I'm getting ready to change gears once again. I'll be working on Ragnarok for the rest of the month. Hopefully I can have the chapter complete by the end of July.