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1027 No. 1027 ID:
Really only creating this thread so I can use this awesome picture to head it.
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>> No. 1031 ID: ba3603
Can we expect to see any power armor combat later down the road?
>> No. 1032 ID: 4433f2
>Star League Banner.jpg

I thoughtI smelled Battletech.
>> No. 1033 ID: f56f02
>>1031
The very next chapter features gunfights and hand to hand as well as Emendi pulling a Master Chief.

>>1032
Yeah, didn't I say in the first newsletter?
>> No. 1045 ID: 5d9d85
>>1033

Emendi shifted his grip on the beachball-sized orb, glancing dispassionately out the cargo door's porthole. He opened a comm channel to his commander and spoke calmly in his gruff voice, though simmering anger was unmistakable beneath the surface.

"Sir, permission to leave
New Moon."

The response of a slightly perplexed Eversor crackled out of his armour's speakers.

"For what purpose, Emendi?"

Emendi stepped back with one leg, balancing the sphere between the thigh of the other and one arm. With his free arm, he took hold of the cargo door's emergency release lever.

"To give the Claw back their Voltorb."

...

>> No. 1048 ID: f56f02
>>1045
lawl. Pretty much, only with less Voltorb and more ripping off of heads and arms.
>> No. 1052 ID: 4433f2
>>1048
>ripping off limbs
Pulling a chewbacca?
>> No. 1055 ID: f56f02
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>>1052
This picture is missing the most vital configuration: the Chewbaccer. Can you guess what it is? Hint: it's a fist.
>> No. 1075 ID: e7c313
Arm-ripping: A gentleman's handshake.
>> No. 1076 ID: 5d9d85
>>1075

Espy, you had best make a thread for Ragnarok >(
>> No. 1080 ID: f56f02
I really need to throw something out to prove I've been writing, so here goes.

The clearing was very still, and very quiet. The sun was high in the sky and the rocky stream sparkled merrily in the light. A waterfall some hundred yards away rushed steadily while Flying-types sang in the broad, dark trees. The air was cool and humid, with a barely perceptible warm wind descending from the heights of the waterfall. The forest had moved in when the glaciers left some ten thousand years ago, and the new ecosystem was like none this planet had ever beheld. It was an environmental gem, bearing a diversity of species rivaled only by the shallows of the ocean.

A Ralts-class forage group, a Gallade and two Kirlia, emerged from the thick of trees, their white and green bodies making them surprisingly difficult to see in the dappled light. They approached the stream and the Kirlia drank while the Gallade kept watch. This Gallade was young, and Dr. Moriarty had observed that he was caught up in the throes of youth, walking with a swagger that he had not earned. An older Gallade would have immediately scanned the innocent patch of bushes across the river upon entering the clearing, as it was such an obvious hiding spot. But Moriarty had correctly expected the young one, whom he had designated Sigma-27 "Tony," to draw forage escort duty for this sector at this time of day. The animals were highly organized, making them highly predictable. Moriarty knew that he could only get away with this hiding spot because his target that day was young and dumb. If a more experienced animal was working escort, he could never do it. For example, if the Gallade was, say, Upsilon-05 "Philip," then Moriarty would have been cut to pieces before he even saw the pair of Kirlia. Or Lambda-13 "Ellen," who would not kill him but would throw river rocks at him until he got the point.

S27 was not an imbecile, but he was overconfident, and today he would learn an important lesson. Tony looked around the clearing, striding about slowly, gracefully waving his arm blades about and enjoying how much his fast, lean body impressed the Kirlia. He strode slowly into a shaft of sunlight, and nonchalantly waved to the Kirlia to move with him.

Wait for it, thought Moriarty.

The Kirlia finished drinking and followed into the sunlight, and the effect was immediate. They began to dance, twirling and spinning through the air, performing dance moves in impossible slow motion using their powers to hold themselves aloft. Tony paused to watch them, and for a moment his attention to his surroundings was entirely gone.

Tony felt a thump on his neck and reached up to brush away the bug, but was surprised to find some sort of object clinging to his skin. He pulled it off and examined it. It was metallic, with an incredibly sharp point that bore a drop of blood. He made to turn his head, but his body was becoming rigid, and it was all he could do to throw his arms in front of his face to break his fall to the rocks. The Kirlia had stopped dancing and were looking at him with concern.

"What's wrong, High Leaper?" little Crescent Moon asked him.

"I can't move!" he responded, allowing more panic to cross the mental stream than he had intended. "Teleport away immediately!"

"Someone approaches!" Falling Star cried, and Moriarty was wading across the river at top speed with a dart rifle over his shoulder. He ran up to the fallen Gallade even as the pair of Kirlia growled and bristled at him.

"Port away right now!" Leaper said more insistently. He was becoming quite frightened by the fact that though he did not feel tired at all, his body simply refused to respond. Breathing came easily, but it was as though all his muscles had fallen asleep at the same time. He felt the distinct pull of psychic power being used nearby, and from the flashing lights figured that his companions had both tried using Confusion, and that they had either both missed or his attacker had simply shrugged it off.

Moriarty rolled Leaper over onto his back and pulled a measuring tape and clipboard from his bag. He began taking measurements - height, length of blades, length of fins, even the length of his hair. He then pulled a strange fixture out, a piece of tarp attached to several ropes, almost like a tent without a roof. He dragged Leaper's body into the tarp, and straining heavily, picked up the juncture of the ropes. The needle on a dial at the rope juncture spun to reveal Leaper's exact weight, and Moriarty made note of it.

Leaper heard his attacker cry out in pain, and he could move his eyes just enough to see that Crescent Moon had sunk her teeth into the human's forearm. Moriarty, having been bitten by more than a few of their kind, handily dealt with it by reaching down and pinching the nerve than ran down the edge of a Kirlia's jaw, causing Crescent's mouth to immediately snap open.

As suddenly as it had started, it was over. Leaper regained the ability to lift his head, and his other muscles were quickly recovering. Moriarty had crossed the river again and vanished into the trees, and the Kirlia were kneeling by Leaper's side, visibly frightened.
>> No. 1084 ID: 07be81
>>1080
I don't know *what* the hell that was all about, but it sounded promising...
>> No. 1085 ID: d9d4f4
>>1084

This.
>> No. 1091 ID: 6a4af1
>>1080
Sounds like specimen observation, namely recording phenotypes. A menial psyentific job. *ba dum tss*
>> No. 1092 ID: f1fc0b
>>1091
Sure, that's WHAT he was doing, but the WHY behind the WHAT is the intriguing bit.
>> No. 1093 ID: f56f02
>>1092
You don't need a reason to do science! My friend and I hit a McDonald's a couple hours ago for a scientific test: to see if ordering a "McGangbang" at the drive thru would actually work. Results were negative :(

What you should ask yourself is how does it pertain to spess mehrens and psychic world-ending shit.
>> No. 1094 ID: 499bf6
>>1093
Sort of what I was getting at. Clearly this has something to do with Ranek and the rest, or with the freaky cultist dudes or some other faction we have yet to meet. Who does this guy work for and what is he hoping to accomplish by these measurements? How long has he or a colleague been taking data like this and what trends might they have discovered? What is the significance of this scene, if in fact there is any at all. There's so many questions and so few answers...
>> No. 1101 ID: d9d4f4
>>1093

Pedophilia?
>> No. 1104 ID: f56f02
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>>1101
Er...what. A McGangBang is a McDouble with an entire McChicken in between the two patties of the burger. It's amazing.
>> No. 1105 ID: 19f4db
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>>1104
Oh my god.... It's almost remenicent of the Luther Burger...

On topic: I've been working my way through Norther Star recently (inb4 slowpoke), and it's getting pretty good. Just finished the Interlude between parts.
>> No. 1109 ID: e7c92b
>>1105
THIS IS SO DELICIOUS. After eating it I learned the secret to making food that induces The Itis. All during a brief coma, quickly followed by a heart attack of course.
>> No. 1134 ID: 0a3917
>>1104
hmm, odd that this is the first time I have heard about it. I am thinking of creating my own sandwich.

How does a big mac with two spicy mc chickens inside it sound? covered in the specially ordered mcbuffalo sauce.
>> No. 1135 ID: d9d4f4
>>1134

Oh god, get out of my head!
>> No. 1136 ID: d8a927
>>1134

My arteries are screaming.
SCREAMING.
>> No. 1302 ID: 19f4db
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1302
Just a late night bump. I promise to read up on the second half of this once i finish chapter 4 (which is shaping up, finally).

>>1136
Screaming? I want to hear them beg for mercy.
>> No. 1313 ID: e7c313
>>1302

They'll be too dead to bother.
>> No. 1351 ID: d9d4f4
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1351
Awesome, but not as awesome as it looks.
>> No. 1353 ID: 4433f2
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1353
/r/ Baneblade. Do you really need a reason?
>> No. 1458 ID: 19f4db
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>>1456
Oh come on, don't belittle yourself. Oh Hey, I'm quoting another thread, how unlike me.

Anyway, longtime no talk-to-you-about-this. So sorry that I've neglected to keep my end of my "I'll read your story" bit. Been busy, distracted, preoccupied, and many other reasonable excuses. But low and behold, I have returned!

I've read all that you have put up Ausare, and my word, this is quite the spiel you are going on. 2 stories going on at once, almost confusingly. It got to the point to where at times, I looked forward to getting back to Marcus, then wondering "what the hell is happening to Dominic?" I think you've done a fine job in that regard.

The Scifi (how isn't that a word, spellcheck!?) angle is very interesting, especially....wait...what can I say without spoiling? Eh, spoiler tags for a reason: The way the people of the Norther Star refer to pokemon as "aliens" and how everything is psychic to a degree is interesting. Also: Mewtwo? Hells yeah man.

Back on Earth, the characters you have facing gangshootings, sudden attacks, and fuck-all crazy rituals are very enjoyable to read. Grog is funny, and very refreshingly oblivious to the grim and bleak happenings.

I guess, after this long overdo post, the most I can say is: Dude, what's up? It's been a while since you posted with any regularity on here. I hope it isn't because you think your story is waning in popularity, because you've got at least 1 avid fan waiting for more!

PS: Can you forgive me for derailing the topic to insane fatty foods? I wasn't intentional i swear...
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>>1481
Oh no you don't, you get back here and post in your thread! You don't just ignore a positive review and query as to why you've become a ghost around here.

Ok, i'm not really mad, just saying. Also, this thread DID get pushed back down rather quickly, so that's a feasible excuse too.
>> No. 1811 ID: ecf1f7
http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600048254&chapter=10

Shorter than I would have liked it to be.
>> No. 1812 ID: abb5ae
>>1811
holy fuck this is awesome.

Such a long update though, so I need to re read the previous chapter Im thinking.

it's funny, because only yesterday I was thinking "Ausare hasn't updated in a while. Hmm."
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>>1811
Not too shabby... You certainly have a knack for the sci-fi genre.
>> No. 1815 ID: 881e08
Well. I just jizzed in my pants.

My only gripe is that I would've liked some of the Star getting fucked up to be told from the point of view of the people onboard. It seemed a bit detached to provide the emotional response you were going for, despite the valiant effort to do so.
>> No. 2471 ID: 3bff9c
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2471
>No activity in months

Are you there, Ausare?
>> No. 2718 ID: cecd32
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Yeah, so I'm like, back and shit.
>> No. 2719 ID: 78bd13
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>>2718
>> No. 2726 ID: 506b49
>>2718

HOOOOO
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